By Vivian Shipley. Reviewed by David Chorlton.
All Your Messages Have Been Erased, by Vivian Shipley, 2010, Louisiana Literature Press,
128 pp., paper, $14.95, ISBN: 978-0-945083-28-3 (paper), 978-0-945083-27-6
(cloth)
For a long time I found it difficult to take opera seriously, despite the music
and the quality of singing. In the exaggerations and excesses, I saw only
falsity whose justification for existing was to be a catalyst for a theatrical
production that presented drama whose roots seemed rarely to be in life as we
recognize it on the earthly plane. Eventually I changed my mind; I think the
credit goes to Puccini. Yes, I realized that everything about an opera is
artificial except the emotions an opera conveys. Having overcome my bias, I
have gone on to enjoy the moments, however unbelievable or overwrought, in
which a hero or heroine rises – onstage – above all limitations. My conversion
notwithstanding, I can still understand the reservations over stretching
credibility in order to create art. The dramatic monologue in poetry runs the
same risks as opera, in that the poet gives voice to another person, often
compressing long term experience into a few lines that may or may not strike us
as credible. When poems are written in a voice not the poet’s, the reader ought
to be able to imagine the speaker through the script that has been written, and
this is always a potential stumbling point.
In her newest book, Vivian Shipley moves through time and space to invoke the
voices of, including others, Mary Shelley, Winifred Benham (accused of being a
witch in 1697 Connecticut), and Adolf Hitler’s sister. My first questions when
faced with such a cast are about why these characters have been chosen.
Certainly in our age it is sadly appropriate and necessary to examine lives spent
close to misdirected power or else falling victim to religious mania. What we
most obviously gain from such a collection is the information the poems contain
about specific events as we take advantage of the author’s own researches and
reading. a great example of history coming to life with a personal voice comes
in "Number Fifty-two: Winifred Benham, Hartford, Connecticut, October 7,
1697”with such lines as;
Pulled down
to blackness, encircled by the hand of God,
three
minutes would prove my innocence. My accusers
rehearsed
their lines: John Moss, 15, only grandson
of
Wallingford’s commissioner and Elizabeth Lathrop,
19,
daughter of the New London Court judge, testified
I had
frequently and sorely afflicted parts of their bodies
too private
for inspection.
Shipley’s expansive style lends itself well to this interweaving of the factual
and dramatic. The original events would, in themselves, have provided enough to
rattle us awake while imagining the speaker’s voice adds an emotional layer
that is easily omitted in a dry history. Surely too, the poet will find a
degree of liberation to speak from another’s experience and thereby reach a
kind of imagery that wouldn’t occur in dealing strictly with the here and now.
Toward the end of this same poem we find;
Time surely will
swallow up
my place in history as the last witch tried
in
Connecticut, but the sight of a cormorant, shining
like a
black angel struggling to fly, will keep alive
the cry of
a believer fallen.
The hurdles one must overcome to make this genre work include presenting
information as an integral part of the poem and not simply tell it with line
breaks. For the most part, the poems here succeed, although at times a good
idea doesn’t translate so easily into a lyric. The "SISTER”in the sequence of that name is
Hitler’s. My new operatic leanings make a moment like this (in "At Night Paula
Hitler Thinks of Her Brother”) all the more appealing:
Grass
greened our knees, but did not leave
a stain
like my love for my brother does,
blood red,
a candle dripping in my heart.
For the most part, "SISTER”
explores the life a demon from an unexpected standpoint. (I am reminded of the
Andre Heller’s documentary film "Blind Spot” in which he interviews Hitler’s
secretary, Traudl Junge.) The transmission of information intended for the
reader is at times directed at Hitler himself, and once in a while the poetic
quality flags a little. For instance:
I’ve come from Vienna
to
Berchtesgaden to be with you. It is late
March, even
I know your war is not going well.
After the interesting literary array of characters in the first section (Holly
Stevens, editing her father, Wallace’s work, Lucia Joyce . . . ), I found the
second group’s opener, "Ode to Virginia Tech, Blackburg: April 16, 2007,” to
take off with a special energy, perhaps fuelled by the fact of its inspiration
being recent, as it explores an individual’s terrible descent into violence.
The book does shift again at its final section, where the arias give way to a
more personal tone. In "Missing My Mother’s Last Breath” the emotion comes from
mundane rather than mythological sources, such as "my glasses forgotten,/I am
three minutes too late.” It is Vivian Shipley who speaks, openly, and
reflectively in "Orphan.”
I left
Kentucky, Methodist church revivals, pledges
not to
drink alcohol and called Connecticut home.
Today I am
free of all that. Yet, why am I bothered so
by the
erratic mess my mother made with her box
of
Crayolas?
We may seek the emotional lives of others in a theatrical drama, but Vivian
Shipley never overlooks the significance of small things, even in the light of
historical events.